seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

[MuQadas]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

Muqaddas, aapkaa shukria bahot bahot k aapne kalaam paRha aur ek she'r kii nishaan-dehii kii jo mujhe bhii bahot pasand hai...agar abba zinda hote to vo khud u ke sar pe haath rakh kar kahte...thank you, beTi :)

oh MY GOD v sweet reply :rose

[Gul]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

salaam dosto,

aapkii Khidmat men vaalid-e-marHoom kii Ghazal pesh karne kii jasaarat kar rahaa huN. ummeed hai k pasand aayegii. aapkii aaraa kaa shiddat se intizaar rahegaa :) shukria.

1.
sar taa ba-qadam Husn vo samaan-e-tamanna
ek ek adaa silsila-e-jumbaan-e-tamanna

2.
us 'aariz-e-naazuk pe mirii har nigeh-e-shauq
ik mauj-e-naseem-e-chamanistaan-e-tamannaa

3.
ho fikr bar-aane kii havis hii ko mubaarak
yeh kaavish-e-be_jaa nahiiN shaayaan-e-tamannaa

4.
ham soKhta jaanoN ko na chheR, ai nigeh-e-dost!
seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamannaa

5.
dekho to zaraa laala-o-gul kaa kabhii khilnaa
kis rang meN hai Khoon-e-shaheedaan-e-tamannaa

6.
jab jamm'a huye shauq ke ajzaa~-e-parishaaN
baiThaa thaa kaleje emN vohii jaan-e-tamannaa

7.
terii nigeh-e-naaz ne phooNkii hai yahaaN rooH
sotaa thaa paRaaopai'kar-e-be_jaan-e-tamannaa

8.
us ruKh pe hai rang ik Khaamosh talaatum
jis tarHa mirii rooH meN haijaan-e-tamannaa

9.
ai maSlaHat-e-'aql! haTaa apnaa nasheman
aayii hai bahaar-e-sharar_afshaan-e-tamannaa

shukria

Ahan !! :) Wah aik mukaml Ghazal !
Buhat khooB

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

Ahan !! :) Wah aik mukaml Ghazal !
Buhat khooB

shukria aapkaa bahot bahot...isii Ghazal kaa part TWO bhi hai...insha Allah jald hii post karuUNgaa : )

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

Bahot khoob janab nice sharing

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

Bahot khoob janab nice sharing

aapkaa be_Had mamnoon huN Wasi saaHib ke aapko kalaam pasand aayaa...shukria :)

[life.]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

bohat aal
nice sharing

[SherAli]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

bohat aal
nice sharing

pasandeedgii ek liye shukria..agar Abba marHoom zinda hote to sar par haath rakh kar kahte...jeetii raho beTi :)

[khan khan]

Re: seene meN liye baiThe haiN toofaan-e-tamanna...mere vaalid marHoom kii ek GHazal

Bohat Umdah.........